Oh, this made my shipper heart happy. I think you really captured how nerve wrecking it can be when you know you like someone, but you're so positive they don't feel the same way. Gretchen seemed so desperate in that scene with Claire, and you captured that perfectly, even if you hadn't seen the episode before.
Claire waiting for her in her bed was just lovely. I hope you write more of them in the future!
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Date: 2009-10-13 09:09 pm (UTC)Claire waiting for her in her bed was just lovely. I hope you write more of them in the future!